Developmental Edit

The developmental edit will focus on the high-level aspects of the manuscript, including the overall plot, worldbuilding, character development, voice, story structure, writing quality and dialogue. My goal of a developmental edit is to help you realize your vision.

What I Look For

  • Plot development
  • Character development
  • Structure
  • Content
  • Organization
  • Messaging
  • Reducing redundancies
  • Pacing
  • Dialogue
  • Worldbuilding
  • Story arc
  • Voice
  • Storytelling
  • Info dumping, head-hopping, and point of view consistency
  • Balance between show and tell
  • Story timeline

What You'll Get

  • 1
    Full manuscript analysis and guidance on your plot, structure, storytelling, themes and characters, including an opinion of each chapter of manuscript
  • 2
    A written summary detailing the reasons behind my edits/advice
  • 3
    Two versions of your manuscript page edits (Track Changes and clean)
  • 4
    Email follow-up for questions

Please note that developmental editing doesn't involve correcting grammar errors, spelling mistakes, and the like.

Rate

$0.03 - $0.04 per word

Dan DeKoning

Author of fiction and poetry, specializing in mystery and suspense. Professional editor helping writers bring their stories to life.

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